Trials of Magic (The Hundred Halls Book 1) is a world literally full of magic, and cell phones. But mostly magic.
Normally style issues are negligible or not worth mentioning, today – I’m starting there. I love the cover. I often couldn’t tell when new chapters started (a formatting issue), and it follows third person with multiple people being followed. All these things gave me a mixed impression of the work that was hard to look past.